Love – A Poem By Prof. Shaheena Asif From Her Book “The Ordinary Woman”
LOVE ?
Who will love me?
When I am –
Beautiful and dutiful
Joking and laughing
Healthy and wealthy
Kind and helpful
Just any body and everybody
Who will love me?
When I am –
Sad and bad
Demanding and commanding
Lazy and crazy
Fat and ugly
Unwell and poor
Just no body and nobody
Shallow but very nice n true!!!
Always love poetry.
Yes shallow but unfortunately this is the bitter truth! Nice poem.
Very thought provoking and contains the real depth. Yes that is very ugly reality. People accept others with their positives but not ready to own with their negatives.
Prof Shaheena i was so touched by the words in your poem .It depicts a beautiful you. So realistic – so true – Beautifully you used the words everybody and nobody
May God Bless the Hand That writes so beautifully. May God bless you Happiness .Keep writing and share
You need rhetoric, more chops/grinds/cuts to mince what is in your mind, basically you have rhymed – Not trying to dis-heart you but I am sure you can do it much better – concentrate on your thoughts, think and the words will flow more easily – don’t worry about rhyming……